by Duckie.
Here lies the dedication to the poem known as: Pain
Removed in the hopes that the publishing will go ahead smoother.
Look for my book "Skirting the Edge" in retail stores.
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damn this good too, anyone can pound out some prose but this is alright-dave
ReplyDeleteWow nice work.
ReplyDeleteYou're very descriptive, which is always good with any kind of writing. You really bring hte person into the poem, into the sunrise and such.
Very nice work, I love the end.
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