I quite like that. You're very discriptive (As usual >.< & it is morning so my response will probably be lame. I am so NOT a morning person. >.< & sorry in advance for lameness) but I love the description about the pearl in stanza 3. (Yay! Number 3!!!)
I have absolutely no idea how you could possibly have gotten the poem idea from the songs I told you about, but hey, each to his/her own. :P
But, overall - nice work. ^.^
Imma go before I type up something stupid about me not having any jelly. I'm sooooo tired right now.
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I quite like that. You're very discriptive (As usual >.< & it is morning so my response will probably be lame. I am so NOT a morning person. >.< & sorry in advance for lameness) but I love the description about the pearl in stanza 3. (Yay! Number 3!!!)
ReplyDeleteI have absolutely no idea how you could possibly have gotten the poem idea from the songs I told you about, but hey, each to his/her own. :P
But, overall - nice work. ^.^
Imma go before I type up something stupid about me not having any jelly. I'm sooooo tired right now.
But good work. ^.^
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