I like how you phrase it; Eighteen years of life in a box.
It's a really personal poem, this one, tells us a little more about your life. Tis cute. ^.^ As always, I like how you've ended it. "We're moving soon. And we won't come back".
I've never had to move away anywhere, so you're showing me what it's like, saying goodbye to the place that's held you since you were born.
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I like how you phrase it; Eighteen years of life in a box.
ReplyDeleteIt's a really personal poem, this one, tells us a little more about your life. Tis cute. ^.^ As always, I like how you've ended it. "We're moving soon. And we won't come back".
I've never had to move away anywhere, so you're showing me what it's like, saying goodbye to the place that's held you since you were born.
Great work. ^.^